I sometimes (read: rarely) do this thing where I attempt a live-tweeted edit pass on the VN I’m currently reading. Well, that or just trash the bad parts because effort. It’s rather entertaining to do, and I think I got some decent stuff in this time. Well, you can judge for yourself; start from the bottom.
A critique of it would be useful to me – god knows I tend to get on horses a bit too high for me, and realizing (where) you suck is a part of the process of improvement, if a painful one.
There may or may not be a second installment of this, ever.